"I'm on SMS" Three words:
a contraction, a preposition, an acronym.
A tome of how I cannot reach you.
Words to halt mine, not even your own,
conveying the promise of contact
between my hoping and your eternal
terminal distance.
I'm on SMS.
I'm here but not.
I can hear you
if only you would brave
an SMS.
It is only 10 pesos,
and my heart,
and my pride,
after all.
Welcome to Our Humble Blog
a dear friend and i have decided to write again. in an effort to get our creative juices mutually flowing (skip past the innuendo and move on to the meat, yeah?), we've decided to co-author a blog and fill its, er, electronic pages with our work. however, to make things interesting and challenging, we have to abide by the following rules:
the rules:
creative criticism and other forms of comments are welcome.
the week starts tomorrow.
GAME ON!
the rules:
- 1 creative entry per week (7 days) minimum
- said entry must be new, and never before published
- said entry cannot be a review of any sort
- said entry may have no minimum, or maximum number of words
- old entries can be published provided that an introduction with dates is included before the main body of the work.
- failure to write a new entry as defined above will result in penalty for the offender in the form of treating the non-offending co-author to a meal, with drink of course.
creative criticism and other forms of comments are welcome.
the week starts tomorrow.
GAME ON!
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so who is the I here? it seems that there is a disconnect between the persona and the one being addressed, but in the process, the I and the one being addressed gets mixed up. who is the distant one? the i or the you?
ReplyDeletebasta ang alam ko nasa abroad yung isa sa kanila. sampung piso yung sms e.
ReplyDeleteAng sagot ay andito:
ReplyDeleteWords to halt mine, not even your own,
conveying the promise of contact
between my hoping and your eternal
terminal distance.
c: ang taray naman. pero apart from my confusion, it's really good! :D (as usual)
ReplyDeleteHehe. Mataray. Kasi ang lamig nung pumunta ako sa page na ito. Naka-freeze ang mabait kong brain cells.
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