Sunday, June 20, 2010

Immobilized is a word
I would never use
to describe the feet that pound
on stone and kick at water.
But you, concrete,
you immobilize me.

There seems to be no end
to train tracks winding
through green countrysides and
sodden urban sprawls.
But you, red and green,
halt the locomotion.

In me a steam rises to feed
and fade, to heat and precipitate.
In me, toes must grip ground
and soles must crack on super-
heated asphalt streets
because there is no rest.

For the wicked whips the good
and frenzied to walk
walk and walk and roll
over hills, mountains, marshes
bogs, down tunnels
and caves of limestone.

I must feel the rain
that is your hand in mine
and see the stop sign
that is your smile.
Please, I've traveled
all this way.


Copyright 2011 Cristina Cheng

4 comments:

  1. so are you a train? and what does the rain have to do with it? :) i love how you depict the travels and limitations of such, if that is the case. but alas, i am lost in the rain.

    i think of ee cummings though, when you liken it to a hand. "..and no one, not even the rain, has such small hands.." the tenderness of love and the clarity of reason that love offers.. am i following your drift correctly?

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  2. I just liked the idea of the coolness of rain after a long hot journey. and as a counterpoint to the steam mentioned earlier. :)

    I wrote this to convey the sense of hopeless searching, being exhausted from moving from place to unfamiliar place, just searching.

    Tapos in the end, begging for a stop and some refreshment and hoping for rest, finally. And end to the search in the comfort of love. Cheeeesyyyyy :P

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  3. eeew. cheesy ngA. hahahha. :P pero if i may, maybe not enough development sa contrast and sa pagkahaba n tiring ng journey.

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  4. there isn't supposed to be a contrast. The journey has not ended. This whole thing's an entreaty. The tone is of weariness. Too weary to be long-winded and descriptive.

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